Stories that stay with you
By Jake Joy

Last time, I spoke about stories that stay with you ā or more accurately, the ones that donāt.
This month, I want to take some time to unpick what makes a good story. One that lives in your psyche days, even years, after the final page has been turned.
I think itās fair to say that any writer worthy of the name aims for this lofty goal. I know I would love a reader to say to me, āHey, that story you wrote. Iām still not over it.ā I want one of my tales to live rent-free in someoneās head long after the āendā has been reached.
But how do you do that?
Fantastic question, other me.
My humble opinion is that people are drawn to people. You can have the most exciting plot, set in the most vibrant world a person can imagine, but if the characters arenāt likable or interesting enough, thereās very little reason to follow them on their journey. I think of all the stories that have taken up residence in my head over the years and one commonality runs through them all: Amazing Characters.
I spoke, last time, of my love for Final Fantasy 7. The story told by that video game wouldnāt be nearly as effective without the cast of characters being who they are. Cloud ā the brooding ex-SOLDIER with a confused past, Barrett ā the explosive rebel leader with a guilt-ridden conscience, Cid ā the former pilot with dreams of one day going into spaceā¦
All these characters are real, I mean, not in the strictest sense of the word but you get what I mean. They have goals, fears, flaws. They are alive.
Many of the games, books, and movies that I have not finished in the past have had a lack of good characters.
*Disclaimer. The views head are the views of Jake and not, in fact, empirical facts. *
Watch Dogsā Aiden Pearce was a boring, grey, uninspiring man. I put the controller down after only three or four hours of gameplay. I just couldn’t listen to his flat depressing monologues any longer. Driven by a desire to see his nieceās killer brought to justice, youād think heād be an interesting fellow. Not so much.
The Long Earthās Joshua Valiente was just so bland and impossible to connect with. I finished the first book but couldnāt bring myself to read another four novels featuring him. Described on his wiki entry as āantisocial but with an altruistic natureā. He was just too antisocial to be likeable.
Galadriel in The Rings of Power was boringly good at everything. She had no flaws; unless you count being a humourless -Redacted-, and often solved problems easily. I couldnāt watch past episode 3.
I think the key to writing a story people will remember is to create characters that live on in other peopleās heads. Real people, with hopes and dreams, with flaws and issues, with virtues and vices, and set them free in the world you created.
Then see what they do.
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