Self-Critiquing

Who the hell do you think you are?
I once heard that authors alternate between two perceptions of their work-in-progress. One is: āThis is amazing! Iām a bloody genius!ā The other is: āThis is the worst thing ever written! Ever! In the whole history of story!ā The truth, of course, is that itās usually somewhere in between.
Self-critiquing can be useful. Everyone has areas that need to be developed, whether thatās relating to character, plot or prose. Knowing that we need to examine our writing with an analytical eye is the first step on the road to improvement.
But self-critiquing has its limitations. It can be difficult to be objective. It can be taken too far due to a lack of confidence or having an overly-critical eye. It can hold us back, give us writersā block, or even make us give up on a project thatās worth persevering with. The question heading of this section refers to my own inner voice which likes to rear its ugly head now and again. Imposter syndrome is very real and extremely self-limiting, folks.
How can we overcome the issues associated with self-critiquing?
Distance ā time away from the manuscript so that you return with a more objective eye.
Balance ā what are the pros and cons of your WIP? Try to play to your strengths, identify the areas in need of development.
Feedback ā from a trusted reader. Litopiaās Laboratory and weekly Huddles are great for this!
Experience
In my previous posts, Iāve occasionally referred to difficulties Iāve experienced when writing, or those identified when Iāve reflected retrospectively. One was the limitation of writing from the perspective of a ghost (I realised I needed other ghost characters for her to interact with to avoid her being a mere passive observer of life). The other was realising the drawbacks of writing lots of point-of-view characters (differentiating voice, fully-fleshing out each characterās story etc) ā Iām still grappling with this one!
But itās not all bad! My ghost character got to reflect on life and death in a way that a living character couldnāt. My ten pov novel allowed me to explore lots of different charactersā perspectives on a shared experience, which would be otherwise unachievable.
My recent psychological suspense WIPs have their own issues: does the plot make sense? Are there any holes? How can I sustain tension throughout? With the help of a bit of self-reflection, distance and the generosity of other eyes on the manuscripts, hopefully these areas will be soon be resolved (fingers crossed!).
Final Thoughts
Do you self-critique in a balanced way? How do you achieve this?
What limitations do you need to overcome?
What are the strengths and areas to develop in your own writing?
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