The Querying
In a previous post I mentioned that I was back in the query trenches. To recap, my earlier, experimental novel didnāt sell and I decided it was time for a fresh approach. I ended my relationship with my literary agent amicably, prepared my query letter for my more commercial novel and sent off my submission package to a handful of new agents who work in my genre and whom I admired.
A few full manuscript requests, email exchanges to alert other agents to the fact that there was interest from other parties, and two phone calls later, I accepted an offer of representation from my wonderful new agent.
Here are a few things I learned along the querying journey: ābig nameā, established agents with a long client list may be interested, but they have limited capacity to work editorially on new projects; up-and-coming agents who are building their list are more likely to take on new clients and can give them more of their time; rejection is part of the process ā dust yourself off and move on.
The Phone Call
I was so nervous when my phone rang at the allotted time, but I knew almost immediately that she could be the one. She was warm and enthusiastic but business-like, and totally focused on the manuscript ā what she loved about it, questions that she had for me about different points in the story and gentle suggestions for further development. Everything she said demonstrated that she had really paid attention to detail when sheād read the full.
Iād prepared a list of questions and she answered them all clearly and honestly, including that if the book didnāt sell, she would still represent me as an author (reassuring me that itās about nurturing a long-term career, not just attempting to sell one book). She encouraged me to talk to the other agent before making a decision and, when the call ended, I felt that I would be in safe hands if I accepted her offer.
The Edits
The next step after accepting the offer was for my new agent to re-read the novel and prepare an editorial letter. While I waited trepidatiously for this document to arrive in my inbox, I distracted myself by working on a different novel.
When the note arrived, I read through carefully, keeping an open mind to her suggestions. The document was ten pages long and began with an analysis of the genre and what was working well in the current market. These pages were followed by notes on plot, character, setting etc. (I should make the point here that my agent is a former editor at a couple of publishing houses, so sheās more open to working in this way than other agents might be. This is something worth considering when you select who to submit to.)
After reading through once, I slept on it, then re-read the next day. This time, I made notes, summarising key suggestions. Then I slept on it again. I arranged a phone call with my agent to discuss some of the points in further detail, which really helped to cement the direction I would take the manuscript in.
I decided to implement as many of the suggestions as I could, though my agent pressed the point that this was still my novel and these were only suggestions that I could choose to follow or not. But, I knew I would take them on board ā as an objective reader and an experienced editor, it seemed a no-brainer to listen to her.
Now donāt get me wrong, some of these are BIG edits ā Iāve added a whole new pov character, Iāve changed the context of the reveal, Iām changing who dies, and Iām altering the outcomes for some of the characters! This involves a lot of re-writing with assimilating parts of the original manuscript. Itās challenging and Iām learning a lot about my capabilities along the way.
Emotionally, itās a bit of a rollercoaster. Some days, I despair that I can make it work. I doubt that what Iāve written so far is any good. Is the pace hitting the mark? Is there enough tension? Have I balanced revealing information in the right places without revealing too much too soon? And on and on. However, there are rays of light, days where the words are flowing and my confidence grows that I can pull this off. I guess time will tell which of these attitudes was right (but I remind myself that black-and-white thinking really isnāt helpful ā itās probably a mix of both in reality!).
Experience
So, Iām 30,000 words in and I have a pretty good plan of where Iām heading with the re-write. Weāre aiming for submission to publishers in autumn.
What have I learned from all of this? Do your research. Persevere. Be professional. Be prepared. Stay open-minded. Be willing to put in the work. Keep your expectations realistic (but try to stay positive). And lastly, instead of asking āWhy me?ā when those doubts do creep in, ask āWhy not me?ā
Final Thoughts
What has your querying journey been like?
What have you learned along the way?
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When I first started down this self-publishing journey, I heard quiet rumours of the dangers of scammers. I knew they were out there. I knew they wanted my money (What little of it I have), and I knew they had no shame. What I didnāt know, and was unprepared for, was just how many of…
We all remember those drawn out days of the first Covid lockdown, right? I don’t know how you coped, but while other people were learning new languages and putting out their trash dressed as Ru Paul, I decided to do something quite useless. I would read the Complete Works of Shakespeare. Oh yes. Armed with…
The Good Thereās so much to love about writing ā the excitement of that initial spark of an idea; the stimulation of the challenge to make it work; that feeling you get when you find the perfect word/phrase/sentence/paragraph to express exactly what you mean in the most eloquent way you can; the thrill of positive…
I recently participated in ALLiās SelfPubCon, which focused on the business side of writing. There were sessions on using social media, monetising YouTube, website design, using AI for marketing ā¦ I watched video after video that made my brain turn off. Video after video teaching me how to cash in on the advertising deluge we…
Giving Feedback The title of this post is a sentence thatās often used at the end of a fellow writerās feedback in the Lab, and I think itās perfect. The first time I submitted work for critique and someone responded with this line, I felt a huge wave of relief. It says so much in…
There has long been an association between mental illness and creativity with seemingly endless examples of successful creatives affected by anxiety, depression, bipolar and other mental disorders: F. Scott Fitzgerald, Edgar Allen Poe, Virginia Woolf, Leo Tolstoy, Sylvia Plath, Ernest Hemmingway, J.K. Rowling, Stephen King, Stephen Fry, Emily Dickinson, Franz Kafka, Matt Haig, Van Gogh,…
We are back from a river cruise down the Danube from Budapest to Bucharest. Well, what did we see? We were amazed at the people who are beathing; that is, the air of freedom. New entrepreneurial enterprises have opened upāmany businesses started by people under forty. In fact, our program director on our Viking cruise…
It was an irresistible afternoon, the gorgeously seductive late summer / early-autumn sunlight inviting me to come play in the woodsā¦ how could I refuse? So I grabbed some wild garlic bulbs and a trowel and hied me to the dappled paradise. Work could wait, at least for a couple of hours. Bulb planting is…
Iāve been avoiding the subject of AI for a long time. Iāve tried to ignore it, tried to pretend it wonāt be as big a deal as people are making out, and that it will find its place somewhere and make life a little less cumbersome. But the more time that passes and the more…
Iām Fine Whenever I meet someone new, I try to learn their language. I donāt mean French or German; I mean things like what they convey without actually saying the words, or the way they might say something but mean something different. For the latter, take āIām fineā as an example. It can mean different…
Come over here for a moment, would you? But be careful of the edge of the table, itās rather sharp. Good.Ā Now you can see things from my side of the desk. That towering pile you see in front of you?Ā It’s what some unkind publishing folk call “the slush pile”.Ā Yes, most of itās…
Ā Ā Ā December 1973… a village called Oberjoch (over the hill) in the Bavarian Alps. Six feet of snow! I was learning to ski with a six-man unit from 49 Field Regiment, Royal Artillery. Ā Ā Ā It was a two-week course and we manage to ski fairly well down the smaller slopes at the beginning…
I recently had a great movie night with my daughter. We made a fort (three kitchen chairs with a blanket thrown over the top and far too many stuffed toys to get comfortable), we made popcorn and a bowl of Skittles, and settled down in the living room to watch a movie with all the…
Well, it sort of isā¦ Iāve been fascinated by dystopian fiction for many years ā any story which explores a dramatic change in the way of life for a society, if not humanity (which can of course cross into the post-apocalyptic sub-genre). But itās not just the ābig pictureā of these novels which intrigues me,…
Marcel Duchamp said this: it’s art if I say so. He’s the guy who stuck a urinal on the wall and called it ‘Fountain’. And ever since he did that, the art world swivelled on its axis and became a place where apparently anything goes. And usually for a gazillion quid. Which really gets the…
As a writer, I tend to focus on plot. I love a good action scene, and I also enjoy writing dialogue (probably stems from loving to talk, myself. LOL!). Over the years, Iāve developed a method for outlining my novels thatās sort of a mash-up of different methods Iāve read about. I start with a…
As a kid, I watched Star Trek. Some things have come true. I remember at the market you had to push to open the door. On Star Trek, the doors opened automatically with a SWOOSH when Captain Kirk made his dramatic entrance (wow, heās still with us as I write this). A few years later…
Out of the Mouths of Babes This post was inspired by a comment made by my eleven-year-old son. It was prompted by his question regarding what Iād hypothetically create a YouTube channel about (reading and writing novels of course!). He summed up in one sentence what I took years to work out: āThe most important…
There are debates about audio books vs paperback vs digital formats. This post is not about that. Although that would be an interesting post. But I will not try to convince you to listen to a book if thatās not your jam. Well, I wonāt deliberately try. As for SFFā¦ you either love it or…
I recently wrote a blog post about bad writing in current media and decided that this month I would write about good writing instead. Bad writing is low-hanging fruit; itās easy to spot, and easier still to complain about after you realise something has relieved itself on it. The Acolyte, the show I talked about…
Be Brave Iāve been writing seriously for years. The more I wrote (and read the work of other authors), the more I experimented with different genres, voice, style and structures. I realised I had nothing to lose by going down experimental rabbit holes, except time and effort. But hey, writing is a craft, right? And…
My Writing Journey During my formative years, I had spells when I thought Iād like to be an author when I grew up (if we ever really do). But I didnāt know any writers and it seemed like something that other, cleverer, more privileged people did, not someone like me. But when I reached my…
Donald Sutherland is gone. I saw him on stage at the Mark Taper Forum in Los Angeles years ago in a play. What can one say? M*A*S*H etcā¦ I knew Eddie Albert and bid him adieu nineteen years ago. Wow, stop the clock! I sat next to him at a few dinner parties at our…
Lately, Iāve been hearing lots of complaints about awful writing. Not mine ā people arenāt saying it to my face anyway ā but some movies and television shows that are getting some scathing reviews. Some cry that this is racism, homophobia, sexism etc. That these criticisms donāt hold water because of the place from which…
A long-lost friend dropped by recently. Myka was in Berlin for a conference, and found herself with a free evening. We offered her a barbecue, a bed and a walk in the woods. Myka was thrilled. Like us, she had bought a house on the edge of a wood. She loves forest-bathing, or walking away…
Be Up-Front Agent Pete often says that writers should play to their strength and put it front and centre in the opening of their novel. It sounds so obvious but this hadnāt occurred to me before I heard him say it. Are you good at dialogue? Open with a conversation. Do you excel at action?…
A Rose By Any Other Name Would Smell as Sweet, Right? The Silence of the Lambs, For Whom the Bell Tolls, Elinor Oliphant is Completely Fine, 1984, The Hitchhikerās Guide to the Galaxy, The Colour Purple ā titles that we remember, titles that I love. But what makes them so effective? And do titles affect…
Food, travel, books, movies, television shows, and onā¦and onā¦ A family member of mine doesnāt like avocado. Wonāt dip his chip into guacamole. YUM. A friend I dine with loves escargot. YUK! Slimmy crawl ya’all. I recently watchedāwhat I thought would beāa simple detective series, but when in episode 7 it was revealed the detective…
I always find Beta reading such a great opportunity to learn. I discover things that Iām sure I do myself as a writer that I critique as a reader. In my last few rounds of beta reading, I found myself thinking about the gap between being āthe writerā and being āthe reader.ā I mean, of…
My experience with deal sites. This one is for the writers. Last week, I ran a promotion for my novel The Trouble with Prophecies. I slashed the price down to 0.99 for the week in an attempt to get sales going. For context, the last time I ran a promotion I made the book free…
Donāt Start with a Character Waking Up, Looking in the Mirror, or with a Hangover On Pop-Up Submissions, we received a lot of openings like this. Sometimes it worked, sometimes it didnāt, at least in my humble opinion. It may be a clichĆ©, but Fifty Shades of Grey starts with Anastasia Steele looking in the…
(Disclaimer: although not politically perfect, Iām going to use the familiarity of the term ādisabilityā rather than, say, ādifferently abledā in this post.) Iām gonna say, straight up, that I canāt tell you how to write about disability, primarily because everyoneās experience is different. But I might be able to give you some food for…
I decided to self-publish my contemporary romances after unsuccessful attempts at the traditional route. There are pros and cons to making this decision and lots of issues to consider. Will you pay someone to edit and format your novel? What about the cover design? What platform/s should you upload to? How will you market the…
The pebble skimmed the surface ten times before running out of momentum, then seeming to flounder for a split second, sank into the dark still lake sending ripples radiating outwards. “Ten, dad. Beat that,” said Michael. “Hah, easy,” I said. I scanned the shoreline and spotted a perfect skimmer. A small piece of ancient flint;…
Remember lockdown? Remember how we all got a bit excited in the first one and felt we had to make it count? And some of us, you know, wrote a book? Yeah. Turns out quite a lot of us were wrong there. 80,000 words of relatively competent sentences don’t always add up to a book.…
Rules and Commonalities Iām not a musician but even I know that songs have a structure, verses and a chorus, that they often have a beginning, middle and end, that they can build to a crescendo, explore a narrative, evoke deep emotion and stay in our hearts forever. But just what is the magic ingredient…
Iāve been doing the daily Wordle puzzle since it started. In case you missed it, Wordle is an online game that gives you six chances to guess a five-letter word. It was invented by Josh Wardle, a software developer, for his girlfriend who loved word games. Just for fun, so the story goes. Until he…
Last time, I spoke about stories that stay with you ā or more accurately, the ones that donāt. This month, I want to take some time to unpick what makes a good story. One that lives in your psyche days, even years, after the final page has been turned. I think itās fair to say…
You Are Not Alone Most people experience rejection when querying. Beatrix Potter, author of The Tale of Peter Rabbit, got so many rejections she ended up self-publishing. Now, over 45 million copies have been sold world-wide. Rudyard Kipling was told that he didnāt know how to use the English language. F. Scott Fitzgerald was told…
Time and Head Space When I was teaching full-time, I found it difficult to fit in any writing. Itās definitely not a nine-to-three job! My evenings and weekends were taken up by planning, preparing and assessing, as well as various administrative tasks. Not to mention the demands of family and general life. However, switching to…
In that heady, comforting, all-encompassing safety-net that is the deep love forged by a long life together, my soul-mate and I tried to find ‘our song’. Amongst all the haunting melodies and time-tested lyrics, surely we could find a single song that expressed the depths of our feelings for each other? He suggested some, I…
Who the hell do you think you are? I once heard that authors alternate between two perceptions of their work-in-progress. One is: āThis is amazing! Iām a bloody genius!ā The other is: āThis is the worst thing ever written! Ever! In the whole history of story!ā The truth, of course, is that itās usually somewhere…
āChristmas wonāt be Christmas without any presents,ā grumbled Jo, lying on the rug. That opening line is indelibly inked in my memory. Other fictional characters captured my childhood imagination before the March sisters: Anne of Green Gables, Black Beauty, Big Red. All great stories for children. But āLittle Womenā, Louisa May Alcottās coming-of-age story set…
The Brother has a view on modern verbiage ++ Now, cāmere ātil I tell you this. Iām all ears. What is it? The brother has barred himself from watching television above in the digs. Excuse me? Barred himself for the foreseeable future on account of him having been roaring at the TV in the residentsā…
We All Have Our Own Opinions Of course we do! Life would be very boring if we didnāt. But there are elements to story that seem to be essential and universal. Iāve listed some below but itās not exhaustive and Iām interested to hear other ideas. Character I often hear authors talk about the…
Say What? Writing a novel with more than one point-of-view can be tricky. How can you juggle different personalities and motivations ā and somehow use them to tell a balanced, coherent and compelling story? How can you ensure that each character has their own āvoiceā (something that I find extremely difficult to achieve!)? But does…
There’s something about cats. Yes, in January Ā I burst my eardrum trying to cure the ear mite infection I caught from our two. They wont be Ā sleeping on the bed pillows after that. But I mean more. The truth encapsulated in this post from Jennifer Adcock, writer. “You know who doesn’t get impostor…
Sorry! Iāve been a tad disingenuous with this title because Iām not referring to the act of writing on behalf of others, but rather the literal act of writing about ghosts! Trick, or treat? Of course, there are many ghost stories, especially in the horror genre, but Iāve selected a few from other genres to…
The last few weeks, I have been replaying a video game from my distant past. An old favourite by the name of Final Fantasy VII. I used to play this game almost once a year; I kept going back to it again and again throughout my childhood and often used to inform my imaginative play…
Over achievers rarely herald from untroubled upbringings. Being born to a mother with low confidence in her own abilities wouldnāt have been so bad, had she managed an ounce of confidence in her own children. Such is life. The poor woman was bullied by her father. He, in turn, had been emotionally wrecked by the…
Ciao. Getting ready for our two-week trip to Northern Italy. Northern Italy you say. What about the rest of Italy? Well, in due course. A friend of mine recently went to Italy and did the typical, American 9 day, 10 night tour of Italy on a bus. āBring down your luggage and be on the…
āArenāt you supposed to be writing?ā I shove the nagging question away. The computer will still be there when I return to it, cursor blinking patiently at the top of a blank page.Ā It is Thursday, one of my two weekdays designated for writing. I am cradling a cup of coffee and standing in the…
An Issue of Trust Iāll admit, novels with an unreliable narrator are not everyoneās cup of tea, but I love them. You start off thinking the character is taking us on a believable journey and that we can trust their telling of the events, then unease creeps in. We start asking questions. We wonder where…
Mention the word Trope to us writers and we’ll recoil. Add the word Cliche and you’ll see us running for the hills. These two five-letter words are not what any of us want in our wonderful, new, original, works, right? But consider this: things only become tropes when they are overused, and they only become…
My three psychological novels have unlikeable point-of-view characters. Without balance, they can appear two-dimensional ā and Iāve discovered that achieving that balance is rather tricky! What do I mean by balance? I suppose Iām talking in terms of the readerās perception. Is the characterās dark side countered by a bit of light, or a reason…
A writer friend of mine and I have exchanged writerly encouragement to each other for many years. The most frequent reminder we bounce back and forth is that writing is really hard. We take baffling things in our life, in society, in the world, often stuff that strike us as chaotic, and we try to…
Dear Grandpoppypops Wish you were here? Look at the size of the stamps now! So much larger than the penny black you showed me from your visit. Not much has changed so far as I can see in human structure, society is still set on exploiting other sections of itself. Your industrial revolution really set…
Flann O’Brien’s much-loved character – The Brother – transported to the 21st century. What would he make of contemporary trends and fads? This episode imagines his reaction to Molecular Gastronomy, Nouvelle Cuisine, and the tampering of a subject very close to his heart. ****************** Now the brother has a thing or two to say on…
This is my first post on this forum, so I wanted to do something short and light. What types of distractions interrupt you when youāre hammering away at your keyboard? The phone rings? Your significant other shouts at you from the other side of the house? Your cat comes in and plops down onto your…
My first day as a professional writer, I lifted a police report from the pile at the Coffeyville station and read āMurder.ā Now, this was a small town, and I was pretty sure this sort of thing was a rarity. I wasnāt sure there had been much in the way of this most heinous of…
First Things First Iāve never understood people who have a favourite song, book or film. Surely your choice depends on your mood. Itās the same with genre. Maybe today I fancy reading something light-hearted and fun. Tomorrow I might want to feel a shiver run down my spine. The next day I might be enticed…
Lucky seven they say, but the morning I had to load that many strong-minded mustangs onto a lorry at the top of the Swiss Alps with a 4am deadline, it seemed a doomed number. Especially when lorry drivers with ferry schedules and EU regulations have famously short fuses. They have been known to back out…
Hands up anyone whoās had a bit of writerās block? Looking around I can see thatās pretty much all of us, right? Even you at the back, hiding behind your laptop screen, pretending youāre doing research into character types, whilst actually playing Royal Match and posting videos of your cat. Why do we have such…
I’m delighted to give you an early peek into this yearās Litopia Book Club selections, together with relevant purchase links.Ā Itās a particularly strong and carefully-selected list, and as youāll know if youāve attended one of Jasonās riotous Zoom sessions, a good time can be guaranteed for all! For further information and exact dates, please…
Selling highly-priced, poor-value seminars and writing courses to aspiring authors isnāt just unethical ā itās also damaging to the publishing industry, says Litopiaās Peter Cox in this article for “The Bookseller” That old scoundrel Sam Brannan would have felt completely at home in today’s publishing business. Ā Sam, you may recall, was the original promoter of…
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Well, you did something most writers never do, and you did it well ā change agents! Sounds like it was a smooth transition, too. Well done. I actually canāt fault anything youāve done during this process, It is classic case history in how to āmove on upā. Every committed, professional… Read more Ā»
Thanks, Pete!
Youāre welcome! BTW, you ought to be abler to receive alerts now when someone leaves a commentā¦ either via the little bell icon in the top right of the screen, or if you have push alerts enabled in your browser, as a pop-up.
Brilliant!
That is a very interesting piece. When you decided to change agents how did you choose your next possible candidates? Did you go and watch them speaking. Did you read the work of any of the other authors they agent? Or some other way. When I was looking for an… Read more Ā»
Hi Gina, Thanks for reading. Yes, it is scary! But I’m working through the changes systematically and my agent’s editorial comments made a lot of sense/were well-reasoned, so I had very few doubts about following her suggestions. I’ve also heard a lot of interviews with published authors in which they’ve… Read more Ā»